tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-656652239007877886.post4603868515211996880..comments2016-04-30T18:26:54.102-07:00Comments on Lady Lion: Invetigating sound Kristal http://www.blogger.com/profile/04513658190972902510noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-656652239007877886.post-29400480689296358062016-04-18T07:44:28.892-07:002016-04-18T07:44:28.892-07:00I really loved seeing what you wrote during the pe...I really loved seeing what you wrote during the performance. Initially, I thought you were just writing down nonsense or scribbling. But I'm glad we got to see that there was more to it than that. I also really enjoyed how you didn't let Spencer run the show with the electronic elements of this piece. I like the haphazardness of the set up, and that you had no idea if it would work or not. Also, you guys all dressing similarly helped the piece too. It added to the story as you said, and it made you all appear to have equal importance in the piece. Overall I really enjoyed your piece, but I would have liked to see the audience involved more! Break through that fourth wall and bring us into your performance. Hearing that frequencies generated by everyday things were picked up by the mic was cool though! I didn't know something like writing on paper could sound so cool and distorted, or even hair! I am glad you distorted the mic too because if we had just heard the amplified sound of the pencil writing on paper, it would have greatly lessened the absurdity of the piece. Great job guys! Excited to see what you do next!Genevievehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18112845817444934996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-656652239007877886.post-70804418494965808822016-04-18T07:19:16.251-07:002016-04-18T07:19:16.251-07:00Excellent work! The photo documents are very good ...Excellent work! The photo documents are very good as is your score and the "residue" of the paper you were writing on. Thinking about future pieces -- how you could add to this one -- sharpening the pencil -- you could have a bushel full of yellow pencils and have one or several people continually sharpening the pencils -- you could use an electric sharpener for more sound? Although I really like the manual one - I would like a manual one that is larger. also exaggeration is something to consider: piles of paper? The uniforms were a very good choice as was the strong and vintage looking light and chair. Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16299174761149626408noreply@blogger.com